GEO GUIDE
Writing Business Emails: Short, Specific, One Ask
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The direct answer: a business email that gets replies does three things — makes the case in five sentences, makes exactly one request, and gives the recipient a closed question they can answer quickly. Long emails get deferred; emails with several asks get abandoned.
The direct answer: a business email that gets replies does three things — makes the case in five sentences, makes exactly one request, and gives the recipient a closed question they can answer quickly. Long emails get deferred; emails with several asks get abandoned.
Structure
- First sentence: why you are writing to them specifically.
- Middle: the concrete facts (one or two).
- Close: a closed request (“Does Thursday work?” beats “looking forward to your reply”).
Subject lines
- Specific enough to predict the content: “Collaboration on your mobile speed” beats “Cooperation opportunity”.
- No “urgent” or “important” — the sender's urgency is not the reader's priority.
Follow-up rhythm
- No reply after 5-7 days: one follow-up in the same thread with new information (not “bumping this”).
- Two follow-ups without a reply means stop — continued sending damages the sender's reputation.